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off in the distance by lostinthenightnature off in the distance by lostinthenightnature
Off in the distance

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The photo works quite well in expressing the concept, although the presence of well discernable anthropic objects (the flags and the fountain) may spoil a bit the sense of distance; also, the tree branches on the foreground have a rather central role and physically block the viewer from seeing what's in the distance.

Technique requires some improvement, both on a stylistical and expressive level: while the horizon is defintely crooked (albeit not enough to assume it was done on purpose) and should be fixed, having the line above the middle of the photo would have amplified the sense of distance, as the waterscape would not have been countered by the sky.

Nevertheless, the photo shows a cool view of a beautiful place with a lovely colour match. Also, it's a nice caption of the clouds and their reflection on the water, which do actually cast the viewer "off in the distance".
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Skh-Spra Featured By Owner Jul 22, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
so beauty,......
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lostinthenightnature Featured By Owner Jul 22, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
thank you
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Skh-Spra Featured By Owner Jul 22, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
ur welcome,.....:)
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Michawolf13 Featured By Owner Jul 1, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Beautiful photo!
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:iconlostinthenightnature:
lostinthenightnature Featured By Owner Jul 1, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
thank you
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:iconmichawolf13:
Michawolf13 Featured By Owner Jul 1, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
You are welcome!
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SamsaTales Featured By Owner Dec 18, 2011  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
This looks quiet and peacefull ^_^
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:iconlostinthenightnature:
lostinthenightnature Featured By Owner Dec 18, 2011  Hobbyist Photographer
thank you
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YouAreSoAwesome Featured By Owner Dec 17, 2011
I really love this pic!
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:iconlostinthenightnature:
lostinthenightnature Featured By Owner Dec 17, 2011  Hobbyist Photographer
thank you
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TheFabulousHeather Featured By Owner Dec 4, 2011  Hobbyist Photographer
Beautiful capture! :D
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:iconlostinthenightnature:
lostinthenightnature Featured By Owner Dec 4, 2011  Hobbyist Photographer
Thank you
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TheFabulousHeather Featured By Owner Dec 4, 2011  Hobbyist Photographer
No problem. :)
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saevuswinds Featured By Owner Nov 28, 2011  Student Writer
Beautiful! Where is this?
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:iconlostinthenightnature:
lostinthenightnature Featured By Owner Nov 29, 2011  Hobbyist Photographer
Believe it or not it is a park in the middle of town
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saevuswinds Featured By Owner Nov 29, 2011  Student Writer
I can believe it :)
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ArienKronian Featured By Owner Nov 27, 2011
Well captured :)
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:iconlostinthenightnature:
lostinthenightnature Featured By Owner Nov 27, 2011  Hobbyist Photographer
thank you so much
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MythOfLight Featured By Owner Nov 27, 2011  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
aww, beautiful!~ x3
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:iconlostinthenightnature:
lostinthenightnature Featured By Owner Nov 27, 2011  Hobbyist Photographer
thank you
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Requiem4ThierDreams Featured By Owner Nov 27, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
very pretty
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:iconlostinthenightnature:
lostinthenightnature Featured By Owner Nov 27, 2011  Hobbyist Photographer
thank you
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:iconrequiem4thierdreams:
Requiem4ThierDreams Featured By Owner Nov 27, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
your welcome
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November 27, 2011
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GENERAL IMAGING CO.
Model
X5
Shutter Speed
1/501 second
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F/4.6
Focal Length
5 mm
ISO Speed
64
Date Taken
Nov 24, 2011, 4:06:04 AM
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